第五章 實戰演練——六級作文模擬訓練及范文
模擬訓練一
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Attending TV PK shows does(or does not) good to young people. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 現在各種各樣的電視選秀節目吸引了許多年輕人;
2. 為了實現明星夢，一些年輕人甚至放棄了學業，這種現象引起了許多關注;
3. 你怎么看?為什么?
Attending TV PK Shows Does (No) Good to Young People
模擬訓練二
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Where There is a Will There is a Way. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1.簡單解釋對此諺語的理解;
2.用失敗與成功的實例說明毅力對于成功的重要性;
3.總結全文。
Where There is a Will There is a Way
模擬訓練三
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Campaign Speech. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 你認為自己具備什么條件(能力、性格、愛好)學生會主席?
2. 如果當選，你將會為校園學生做什么?
A Campaign Speech
參考范文
模擬訓練一
【范文】
Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People
In recent years, TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted many young people.Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight.Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people.As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion.
It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun have stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for young people.Several factors contribute to my argument.First of all, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost.Secondly, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values.They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work.Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance.
To sum up, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to make a success.I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows.
【點評】
文章以描述現在各種各樣的電視選秀節目吸引許多年輕人開始進入主題，人們對此持不同觀點。第一段文章結尾作者表明參加電視選秀節目對年輕人沒有好處，接著說明自己的理由，最后使用In a word引出對文章的總結，并提醒年輕人要三思而后行。另外，本文使用了一些精彩的語句，使文章增色不少，例如：great hits，in the hope of，does no good to，hunt after fame at whatever cost，suffer a psychological unbalance，think twice before deciding等等。
模擬訓練二
【范文】
Where There is A Will,There is A Way
Where there is a will, there is a way.This statement means that if you are really determined to do something, however difficult it might be, you will eventually find a way to do it well.The important point is that you must have the will to achieve success.
Ninety percent of the failures that occur are due to the fact that there is no strong will involved.Many people simply say that they want something, but they do not make any attempt to achieve it.So, instead of getting it, they use the feeblest excuse to explain the situation away.
Only those with an undaunted will and spirit can fight their way to final victory.Many a famous man has the same experience.They have attained their status because they have had the will to overcome apparently insuperable obstacles.Many artists,statesmen,writers and inventors have managed to succeed because they possess a fierce will,which has helped them to achieve success.
According to the above statements, we can see that what one needs is a strong will.Weak-willed people never climb to the top.They crumble at the slightest use of force against them.Strong-willed people, on the other hand,will stand up against all odds and will make it a point to succeed ultimately.
【點評】
本文屬于觀點論證型作文。其中的觀點是一句英語諺語。文章首先以解釋說明諺語的含義入手進入主題，緊接著分析成功與失敗的原因，逐步論證毅力對于成功至關重要這一觀點，最后總結說明一個人要取得成功所要具備的素質。這樣文章對觀點的分析透徹又有深度。另外文中使用的精彩語句包括：due to，many a famous man，overcome apparently insuperable obstacles，stand up against all odds等等。
模擬訓練三
【范文】
A Campaign Speech
Good morning, everyone:
I am a sophomore student.I am especially honored in having this chance today to work out a new prospect of our Student Union.
As for the position of President, I find I am quite qualified.Firstly, I do possess the ability required of this post.In the past 2 years, I have been serving as Class President, and I know the importance and art of management.In addition, my personality fits ideally in for the past.I have been growing up in a loving environment, nursing an optimistic nature out of me.And in my dictionary, there is no such word as “difficulty”.Last but not least, nothing can be more important than my various hobbies in helping build up a teamwork with fellow students.
My fellow students, if I am fortunately chosen to be President by you, I’ll do my utmost.I’ll work to build up a fantastic teamwork to better the efficiency of the Union and better serve the student body.More exciting and significant activities are awaiting you to participate in.I won’t let you down.
Thanks for your attention.
【點評】
本文是一篇競選演講詞。文章首先表達心情，做一下簡單自我介紹，進一步說明自己競選此職務的原因，最后展望未來做出承諾，以表示感謝的語句結束演講。文章符合演講的格式以及內容要求。其中精彩語句，例如：work out a new prospect，an optimistic nature，build up a teamwork with，以及句式I won’t let you down.的使用使文章極具煽動力，起到很好的演講效果。 |
