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英語四級寫作旁門左道技巧

作者:不詳   發(fā)布時間:2009-12-29 14:18:52  來源:網(wǎng)絡(luò)
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  四六級考試越來越使模板無用武之地,閱卷老師在閱卷的過程中最多的是關(guān)注同學(xué)們的用詞和句型的使用。
  高分作文標(biāo)志
  1、四級120-150字;六級150-180字;
  2、是否長短句交叉;
  3、用詞是否恰當(dāng),準(zhǔn)確,形象,盡量使用能夠吸引閱卷老師眼球的閃光詞;
  4、關(guān)鍵詞是否換用,切勿老用重復(fù)詞;
  下面給出寫好一篇作文的注意事項:
  1、適當(dāng)用被動代替主動,這樣能更客觀的反映事實, 句子開頭不要總是用we / I (比如寫結(jié)尾時不用 we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to. )舉個經(jīng)典結(jié)尾2004年六月六級作文的最后一段:It is ,therefore, high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that. Thus, its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.
  2、善于使用插入語,比如說把副詞、連接詞等,作插入語放在中間,一般放在主語、動詞或者助動詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號。
  如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入語放在中間,一般放在動詞,助動詞后,兩邊分別加上逗號。
  比如說: Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …
  3、一定要學(xué)會換詞,換形象,具體的代替太寬泛的。(考試中一般不要出現(xiàn)good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等)比如上面例子中,applicable代替proper, approaches代替ways, implement代替 carry out, sharpen one’’s competitive edge代替 enhance one’’s competitiveness(提高某物競爭力)
  下面舉一篇優(yōu)秀作文(14分)的例子,看看他是如何運用各類寫作技巧的。
Computer and I By Simmy
  I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that i indulged myself in googling an army of useful information i had expected ,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music. That night I was sleepless, feeling that the whole world belonged to me.
exceedingly 替換 very
  thrilling 替換 exciting
  sth. exert a tremendous fascination on sb 替換 sb. be interested in sth.
  google 替換 search
  an army of 替換 a lot of
  The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers. Coincident with the advancement of science and technology, computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals. It is no exaggeration to say we have been submerged by them, in large measure!
  The dawn of the new century witnessed 是一個精彩句型,用來描述在某個時期發(fā)生了什么事情;
  Increasing popularity 替換 more and more popular
  Coincident with … 非常地道的詞匯,表達(dá)"與…一致"的意思,替換 With …
  Advancement 替換 development
  Pour into ( flood into / swarm into )替換 enter into
  Current ( currently )替換 now
  Appeal to sb. 替換 sb. be interested in sth.
  Growing individuals 替換 more and more people
  It is no exaggeration to say 經(jīng)典句型,說某事是毫不夸張的
  For a start, we can, freely, search desired information at any moment . Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened. Additionally, we can get huge recreations online by chatting, playing games, or delivering email.
  For a start 替換 To begin with
  We can, freely, search 用了插入語的寫作手法
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