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　　Text Message

　　It is known that text message has both advantages and disadvantages. Some people think it is a blessing, while others regard it as a hell. For example,Opponents argue that they often receive spam messages even in the middle of the night which seriously affected their normal life.

　　As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the former. On the one hand, those people who are busy in dong their business often have no time to meet old friends. On the other hand, they don’t want to spend more telephone charges. So text message is a good choice which is cheaper and more convenience than any other ways. On holidays or festivals, people sending text messages to give greetings and blessings each other.

　　To sum up, text message has more good than harm. It’s a good way for people to improve feelings and communication.

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　　文章結構基本符合題目要求，層次清晰，但是內容上可以再添加一些論證，比如第二段論證點的時候你可以寫的具體一點。注意語法錯誤，語言表達方面可以多看看范文。加油啊。