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　　Text Message—easier and happier to communicate

　　It is no exaggeration to say that text message is widely used in our daily life when mobile telephone comes out. People have different opinions on text message. Some people think it is a blessing, while others regard it as a hell.

　　In my opinion, text message has many advantages. Firstly, people can communicate with others in a easy way. For example, if a young man falls in love with a girl, but he is too shy to tell her, then text message is much helpful to him, which can bring his affections to the girl easily instead of talking face to face. Secondly, on festival days, blessing text messages may take best wishes to our friends and acquaintances, which will bring them warm and happy and promote friendly relations.

　　All in all, text message brings great convenience to us. It is a easier and happier way to communicate with others.

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　　文章結構符合題目要求，層次清晰，但是內容上立意不夠深刻，尤其是舉例說明的時候可以舉例較深刻的方面。注意一下細節的語法錯誤。加油啊。