同等學力英語作文批改：第71期

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　　Text Messaging

　　There is no denying the fact that it is a hotly debated topic today text messaging is useful or harmful to our life. To this issue people’s opinions vary from person to person, from place to place and from time to time. Some people argue that it brings a positive influence on our life while some other people maintain that some of its disadvantages cannot be denied. However, in my view, I believe that its advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

　　There are many reasons responsible for my opinions and the following are the typical ones. On one hand, we could send a blessing or a message to our friend easily at any time only if the place where we send messages has signal. On the other hand, we could save money by sending messaging than calling. It is apparent that either reason plays a role in this case.

　　From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that it does more good than harm. In addition, it is also desirable that government should take positive and effective measures to solve the problem such as sending cheating messages or illegal messages. Only in this way can we build up a harmonious society.

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　　該文基本清楚表達了寫作目的，語言表達比較清楚，內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)的安排也比較合理。注意一下文中的標注部分，一定可以考出比較理想的成績。