同等學力英語作文批改：第70期

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　　Text message

　　More and more people use the telephone, and they send message to their relationships, friends and classmates as well. It is known that text message has both advantages and disadvantages. This trend has aroused immediate concern and widespread discussion among the general public. From my standpoint, I support that Text message is good for our life.

　　In the first place, Text message can tell me the weather information. For example, one day, I go to work .When I get out of my home, I receive text message. It shows that the weather is cold today, so I return to take a coat.

　　Text message makes me get some new news that helps me in my life. In the second place, text message always has many discount information. It takes me a lot of convenience in shopping. What is more, text message brings me information not only on-line but also right.

　　Everything has two aspects. But I think text message has advantages outweigh disadvantages. In my opinion, I support text message.

　　評語：得分8-10分

　　該文結構清晰、內容表示較清晰，基本可以完成寫作要求。

　　但是，有個別的語言使用不當現象，并且在闡述觀點時候，不夠深刻，希望在今后的學習中加以重視。