同等學力英語作文批改：第119期

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　　My View on Reform of Medical Care in China

　　At present, there existing problems in China are high medical costs and difficulty of seeing doctor .That affect people lives seriously and even their life.

　　What are reasons for the problems?Firstly, economic benefits constraint lead many hospital to raise the price to increase profits.Secondly, there is unreasonable  allocation medical resources of Chinese medicine. 80% of China's medical resources are concentrated in urban .Moreover, Health care financing mechanism reform lags behind, most people seek medical treatment at their own expense.

　　In My view ,the health care system reform should be established and improved to promote the medical and health industries. The government should expansion of urban residents in the pilot of the basic medical insurance.The state should increase financial input to support the building of urban and rural residents covered by the public health system, the health care system, medical security system and security system of the four major drugs supply system.

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　　文章結構還可以，比較清晰，只是出現了過多語法錯誤導致分數較低。加油啊！