同等學力英語作文批改：第116期

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　　My View on Reform of Medical Care in China

　　With the development of our nation’s economy,people’s life level have improved quickly.But there are many problems with service  of medicine. For example, people can’t pay hiah-priced medical expenses and to see a doctor is difficult.

　　So what do result in above troubles?First of all,we are a developing and populous country. People’s earnings level is different.Secondly, there happen often unfair affairs in the course of seeing a doctor .Along with ,medicare is not perfect in our country.

　　Therefore,we must raise the party’s capacity to resolve above service of medician questions. In the first place,we must strengthen reform of medical care in china. At the same time, we should devote major efforts to grow our economy and reduce difference of people’s income level.  Besides, we should increase ourself level of competence. At last,we should control increasing of  population in our country.

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　　文章結構還可以，基本上符合題目要求，只是文中有很多語法錯誤，導致分數較低，要加油啊。