同等學(xué)力英語作文批改：第63期

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　　Text Message

　　It goes without saying that text message is playing very important role in our daily life. It delivers messages in a fast speed and make people close each other. Some people hold positive point as to text message and they think it is a blessing, while others regard it as a hell.

　　As far as I am concerned, I agree the previous view. For the first place, it can convey greeting to our relatives during the holiday or festival and take pleasure to them. For the second place, it can reduce cost for us compared to phoning call. Last but not least, text message make our relationship between friends or relative closer.

　　Just as every coin has two sides, text message has its own drawbacks which should not be neglected. Sometime we are disturbed by so many trash messages, even unhealthy ones. Therefore text message should be viewed as two-edged sword which presents us with conveniences and troubles. But we should not give up eating for fear of choking. As I can see it, the best policy is to maximize its advantage and eliminate its side-effects. The supervision should be further to develop text message system. Only by this, it can serve us in a good mode.

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