同等學力英語作文批改：第60期

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　　Text message

　　When it comes to text message, there are defferent opinions about it. Some people think it is a blessing, while others regard it as a hell. In such a society we live, I believe that text message bring us so many benefits that we can’t deprive its development.

　　As a new form of communication in our society, almost everything can be done by sending text messages. For sxample: We can communicate with friends in distant areas through messages which are undountedly cheaper than making a phone call. Wheather forecast, jokes, and daily news also can be achieved easily. Today many departments attempt to inform public by sending messages. Contrasted with other communication forms, it is obviously that the text message is economical and convenient. It also break out the limitnation of a nation’s boundary.

　　In my opinion text message is just a tool. Anyone who owes a mobile can use it. The messages are heathy or not are determined by users. So the related department should strenthen the management of illeagal messages.

　　評語：得分10-12分
    
　　該文完成的比較好，很清晰的表達了自己的觀點并且具體闡述，語言的使用也比較靈活，但是，通過通篇的紅色批注，相信你也發現了一個問題，你的主要錯誤時單詞拼寫上，有可能是打字的出入，但是希望你還是需要加以注意，如果在真正的考試中，出現單詞的錯誤過多，對你的分數影響也是非常大的。