同等學(xué)力英語作文批改：第46期

　　同等學(xué)力英語作文原文

　　When it comes to lucky numbers, opinions differ from person to person. Some people believe that lucky numbers can bring good luck to themselves. So Lucky numbers always be chosen by them in places as many as possible, such as their car brand, house number, mobile phone number, and so on. Nevertheless, other people claim that good luck has no concern with lucky numbers. Then they don’t care about what number they choose.

　　In my opinion, it is a negative idea that people think lucky numbers can bring good luck to us. It is only a kind of psychological comfort, and it is no use to believe lucky numbers. Our success depends on our effort. For example, we can’t pass the examination if we can’t prepare for it. Another, the majority people who often buy lottery ticket can not win though they choose their lucky numbers.

　　In brief, it is no denying the fact that lucky number can enhance our confidence to some extent. But if we want to success, please do our best effort!

　　名師點(diǎn)評：9—11分

　　文章結(jié)構(gòu)基本符合題目要求，層次清晰，但是內(nèi)容上需要更加完善，尤其是第二段論證自己的 觀點(diǎn)的部分要更加翔實(shí)有說服力。

　　語言上比較流暢，語法錯(cuò)誤較少。今后一定要保持自己的優(yōu)勢，然后多注意結(jié)構(gòu)安排以及句子表達(dá)和邏輯方面的練習(xí)。加油啊。