同等學力英語作文批改：第45期

　　同等學力英語作文原文

　　Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?
    
　　Nowadays, an increasing number of people believe that “lucky numbers” really bring good luck. With the rapid development of economy, lucky numbers is becoming more popular in China .For instance, some people conceive that lucky numbers like 3, 6, 8 or 9 would bring them good luck. When people want to choose a car licence number, a phone number or a house’s number, they are inclined to choose one which ends with these lucky numbers.
   
　　However, in my opinion, I don’t think lucky numbers can bring luck. First of all, numbers have nothing to do with luck, if you rely on the numbers, then you may become lazy and won’t do anything. At last, If you want to achieve something or intend to fulfill one of your ambitions, you must work hard, make efforts and get prepared.

　　To sum up, the key to success is only hard work. Numbers are only numbers, we should not attach too much importance to them.

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