同等學力英語作文批改：第40期

　　同等學力英語作文原文

　　Do “Lucky Numbers” Really Bring Good Luck?

　　Nowadays in china,different people have different ideas on the numbers. some people think  that the “lucky numbers” such as “six” “eight” and “nine” would bring Good luck to them while  the others think the number would do nothing to our fate.

　　In my opinion, the numbers could not decide we were lucky or not, the numbers only a tool in our life,they are only represent a kind of signs. In almost circumstances ,one person must try it’s best to gain the success.  The idea of lucky number bring luck is a mental and physical efforts in fact to some extent.  On the contrary ,if all people make their dream  leave with one or some number ,they would haove nothing finally. So ,we should have the corret understanding ,and  make our effort both in our studies and work .

　　名師點評：8—9分

　　本文內容基本符合題目要求，但是由于文中有較多的語法錯誤，拼寫錯誤及表達欠妥當的現象導致分數降低。

　　今后復習中一定要注意這些細節的復習，多看看范文。加油啊。