1. This ain't a one-man deal， kid. You need to wise up and get yourself
a good crew chief and a good team.

    「翻譯」這不是獨角戲啊，孩子。你要放聰明點，給自己找一個一流的總機
師和伙伴。

    strawdog童鞋的作品：

    Alison老師的點評：

    Yeah， excellent！ Nice work. Take a quick look at the "L" sound though，
in words like "deal" and "yourself". The "L" sound is made by using the
tip of your tongue to put pressure on the back of your top front row of
teeth. Strong "L" sounds are really important in natural， native speech.

    （“L ”的發音很重要，大家注意要把舌尖放在上排牙齒的后面發音。）

    2. If some one loves a flower ， of which just one single blossom
grows in all the millions and millions of stars ， it is enough to make
him happy just to look at the stars.

    「翻譯」如果有人愛上了在這億萬顆星星中獨一無二的一株花，當他看著這
些星星的時候，這就足以使他感到幸福。

    janie1225 童鞋的作品：

    Alison老師的點評：

    Excellent work！ That was perfect ！ If I could give you six stars，
I would. Now you can work on speeding it up and making it more conversational.

    （鼓掌~ 灰常好的作品�？梢约涌煨┱Z速，更自然地運用到對話中去。）

    3. Don't ever let somebody tell you ， you can't do something. Not
even me.

    「翻譯」別讓別人告訴你，你成不了才。即使是我也不行。

    vanlentz童鞋的作品：

    Alison老師的點評：

    （很不錯的作品哦~Alison 老師的建議是可以嘗試不同的語音語調，增加些
個性的東東~ ）

    4. You got a dream， you gotta protect it. People can't do something
themselves， they wanna tell you you can't do it. If you want something，
go get it. Period.

    「翻譯」如果你有夢想的話，就要去捍衛它。那些一事無成的人，想告訴你
你也成不了大器。如果你有理想的話，就要去努力實現，就這樣。

    LukeJS童鞋的作品：

    Alison老師的點評：

    Excellent work. ：） I think the "L" sound is still bothering you
though， especially on the word "tell". Practice making strong and weak
"L" sounds with your tongue. The stronger the pressure of your tongue ，
the stronger the "L" sound. Remember that your tongue is pressing on the
back of your top front teeth.

    （這個也是“L ”的發音問題，大家千萬記住發音時用舌尖抵上排牙齒，再
放開。）

    5. He said l would have to accept myself， my warts and all ， and
that we don't get to choose our warts. They are a part of us and we have
to live with them.

    「原句」他說我將不得不接受我自己，包括缺點以及一切，我們無法選擇自
身的缺點，他們是我們的一部分，我們只能接納。

    rock_jy 童鞋的作品：

    Alison老師的點評：

    （介位童鞋要注意的是“we have ”的讀法，建議兩個單詞分開讀，盡量讀
得清晰些哦~ ）

    6. Great Halloween， everybody. I believe it was our most horrible
yet. Thank you， everyone.

    「翻譯」偉大的萬圣節。這是我們表現最恐怖的一次。謝謝大家。

    エイシュン君童鞋的作品：

    Alison老師的點評：

    Well your pronunciation was perfect ！ Now you can work on saying
it a little bit faster， at a more conversational speed. You never want
it to sound like you're reading something.：）

    （對于發音不錯的童鞋來說，下面要做的就是加快語速，不要聽起來像是在
讀神馬，自然些~ ）