考研英語高分作文技巧來襲

 　　時間流轉，轉眼到了十一月下旬了!考研的同學們，離考試時間越近，想必你們對成功的渴求越迫切。但是不管怎么樣，同學們都需要把心態調整得好一些。在此，老師將給大家講解考研英語作文的技巧。

　　現在我們結合一道非常具有代表性的真題來進行寫作。這道題是2009年(英語一)大作文題目。

　　Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

　　1) describe the drawing briefly,

　　2) explain its intended meaning, and then

　　3) give your comments.

　　You should write neatly on ANSHWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

　　面對這道題時，我們需要首先明確寫作要求：至少需要寫三段話，這三段話針對題目中的三個要求去寫。題目中的三個要求是：“描述圖片、闡述寓意和個人評論”。對于本題，我們知道，題目要求的是“一幅圖”。參加過中公考研集訓的同學能立馬想出“一幅圖—圖畫描述段”的段落思路：“直觀評價、整體描述、細節描述、過渡句”。

　　按照這樣的思路，“直觀評價”句，我們可以采用“倒裝+定語后置”的句式來撰寫，一位同學寫的這句話可以作為參考，“Here is a picture, interesting but with thought-provoking implication”。接著來看“整體描述”句，該句需要對圖片中比較引人注目的動作加以描述，以下是一位同學寫的句子，“As is vividly showed in the photo, a number of people are working busily within a huge and complex net, which successfully captures our eyes”。這位同學所寫的句子，句首和句尾分別是一個非限制性定語從句，主句部分則由“主語+系動詞+表語”結構組成。“細節描述”句，描述的是“能體現寓意的細節”。我們可以寫成“After a close watch, it is not difficult to find that the big net is the Internet, through which many people could manage to work together with much convenience and high efficiency but they lack face-to-face communication”。“過渡句”，相對來說，簡單一些，我們可以寫成“Apparently, what the drawing has subtly conveyed is supposed to be given further analysis”。

　　該圖片的主題是“網絡的近與遠”，屬于“社會現象”。對這種類型的話題，我們寫第二段時需要按照“總—分—總”的段落思路寫。以下是一位同學寫的第二段。

　　Theoretically, the Internet presented by the drawing brings us both advantages and disadvantages. As for my part, the former outweighs its latter. On the top of list is that with the help of Internet, the worldwide economy has developed quickly at a unprecedented pace . In addition, there is the other change that everyone could feel deeply and strongly. It is universally admitted much multifarious work procedures and processes have been cut with the help of Internet. No other case can better illustrate the implication than the picture above.

　　這位同學寫的第二段層次感比較強，基本上能按照暑假強化階段的上課要點去組織語句。所寫的兩點：網絡能促進經濟發展、網絡能簡化工作流程，內容上講，還是比較合情合理的。

　　比較后第三段是“個人評論段”。需要對題目話題事物——網絡，給出相應的評論。當然，要想寫好這段，同樣可以采用“總—分—總”的思路。以下同學寫的范文可以供同學們參考。

　　According to the analysis above, it is advisable for us to take steps to maximize its positive effects and minimize the disadvantages. Of all the steps, to make full use of the Internet but not to be totally controlled by it tends to function essentially in the job. Only in this way can we make the best of the value of it.

　　總的來說，應對考研英語作文，同學們一定要把握�。浩�章邏輯清楚、段落框架清晰、語句組織準確。

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