同等學力英語作文批改：第68期

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　　There is no denying the fact that text message is hotly debated topic. Some people think it is blessing, while others regard it as a hell.

　　As far as I am concerned, I believe that text message is beneficial for people. For the first place, text message is a convenient way for people to communicate with others. For instance, people used to spend days or months to convey some message in the times of letter. For the second place, text message is more cheaply than talking on telephone. For the third one, the text message lessens the distance of the world. For example, people can learn many internal messages and foreign messages by subscribing text message. Last but not least, using text message people can know the weather condition in advance. 

　　To sum up, I believe that text message is a beneficial for us, we should utilize it’s advantages by feasible ways.

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