同等學(xué)力英語(yǔ)作文批改：第65期

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　　Text Messaging Is Very Good

　　In recent years, we have gone into information society. Communication and internet technology develop rapidly. Mobile telephone has become popular communicated equipment. Every body has a mobile telephone. Using text message communication has many advantages.
 
　　I think text message can have much convenience. First, using text message can not forbid in any position and any time. For example, when one people go out remote city, mobile telephone can call for immediately. Second, using text message can save mobile telephone bill. For example, abroad one people with text message communication can save many money. Third, text message can communicate outline when calling for another people don’t line.
 
　　However, text message has disadvantages. For example, annoying messages too many can disturb one’s mind. Some important text message sometimes could be delayed by communication system.
 
　　In a word, benefits of text message always are greater than its disadvantages. I think it is a blessing.

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