摒棄僥幸之念，必取百煉成鋼;

　　厚積分秒之功，始得一鳴驚人。

　　——金粉蘿卜推薦

　　幸運星期四，文末有好禮!

　　高考英語滿分作文長什么樣?

　　滿分作文自帶哪些屬性?

　　小金特整理2016年英語真題

　　各試卷滿分作文模板，

　　和閱卷老師揭露的真相，

　　供大家學習、研究，

　　學到就是賺到哦。

　　2016新課標1卷滿分作文模板

　　【試題】

　　假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿公司兼職，已寫好申請書和個人簡歷(resume)。給外教Mr Jenkins 寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)

　　注意：

　　1. 詞數100左右;

　　2. 可以適當增加細節，已使行文連貫。

　　【滿分范文】

　　Dear Ms Jenkins,

　　I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.

　　In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.

　　Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　2016新課標2卷滿分作文模板

　　【試題】

　　假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂部(photography club)將舉辦國際中學攝影展。請給你的英國朋友Peter寫封信。請他提供作品。信的內容包括：

　　1.主題：環境保護;

　　2.展覽時間;

　　3.投稿郵箱：intlphotoshow@gmschool.com.

　　注意：

　　1.詞數100左右;

　　2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　【滿分范文】

　　Dear Peter,

　　Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Show. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June 15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know you take good pictures and you've always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on that themethe last time you visitedour school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, youcan send your photos to .

　　Hope to hear from you soon.

　　Yours

　　Lihua

　　2016新課標3卷滿分作文模板

　　【試題】

　　假定你是李華，與留學生朋友Bob約好一起去書店，因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵件，內容包括：

　　1.表示歉意;

　　2.說明原因;

　　3.另約時間。

　　注意：

　　1.詞數100左右;

　　2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

　　【滿分范文】

　　Dear Bob,

　　I’m sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble.

　　Shall we go on Saturday morning? We can set out early so that we’ll have more time to read and select books. If it’s convenient for you, let’s meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　2016天津卷滿分作文模板

　　【試題】

　　假設你是晨光中學學生會主席李津，你校擬向美國友好交流學校的中文班捐贈一批圖書。請根據以下提示，寫一封郵件與中文班班長Chris聯系，并告知將于今年七月赴對方學校參加夏令營時帶去贈書。

　　(1)自我介紹;

　　(2)擬捐贈圖書的類型、冊數、用途等;

　　(3)詢問對方的其他需求。

　　注意：

　　(1)詞數不少于100;

　　(2)請適當加入細節，使內容充實、行文連貫。

　　參考詞匯：學生會 the Student Union

　　Dear Chris,

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours，

　　Li Jin

　　【滿分范文】

　　Dear Chris，

　　How is everything going I am Li Jin, president of the Student Union from Chenguang Middle School. Now I am writing an e-mail to tell you something about our donated books.

　　We will go to take part in the summer camp held by your school this July, which makes us very excited. At the same time, we are going to bring along about five hundred books with us for your class. Most of them are about Chinese and some about Chinese cooking as well. I believe these donated books will not only make you more familiar with China but help enhance your Chinese.

　　By the way, if you need any other kind of books, please do tell me.

　　Yours，

　　Li Jin

　　2016北京卷滿分作文模板

　　【試題】

　　假設你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華。你班同學參加了學校的“地球日”系列活動。請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以Actions for a Greener Earth”為題，給校刊“英語角”寫一篇英文稿件，介紹活動的全過程。

　　注意：詞數不少于60。

　　提示詞：地球日Earth Day

　　【滿分范文】

　　Actions for a Greener Earth

　　A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.

　　Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.

　　We are very proud of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.

　　2016江蘇卷滿分作文模板

　　【試題】

　　請閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

　　In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves, but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”.

　　Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers’ daily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.

　　Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future Singer冶 competition. He has already received three similar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an oversea s tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote This is a question that troubles him very much.

　　【寫作內容】

　　1. 用約30個單詞寫出上文概要;

　　2. 用約120個單詞闡述你對網絡投票的看法，并用2 ~3個理由或論據支撐你的看法。

　　【寫作要求】

　　1. 寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;

　　2. 作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱;

　　3. 不必寫標題。

　　【評分標準】

　　內容完整，語言規范，語篇連貫，詞數適當。

　　【滿分范文】

　　On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it puts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not.

　　In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek supports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible.

　　To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting.

　　2016浙江卷滿分作文模板

　　【試題】

　　“Planning is good ,but doing is better”是一句英國名言。請以此為題目用英語寫一篇100-120詞的短文。

　　要求如下：

　　1.簡述你對這句名言的理解;

　　2.用一個具體事例加以說明;

　　3.給出恰當的結尾。

　　注意：1.文章的標題已給出(不計詞數)：

　　2.文中不得以任何形式透露地區、學校、老師或同學姓名等真實信息，否則按作弊行為認定。

　　【滿分范文】

　　Planning Is Good ,But Doing Is Better

　　Planning is good as it decides in detail how we do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.

　　My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I Spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful prounnciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.

　　I know how I achieved my success. It came from good planning and better doing combined.

　　滿分作文自帶哪些特征?

　　資深閱卷老師 | 文

　　1. 內容充實，要點全面

　　考生可嘗試下面幾個步驟來避免審題偏差或遺漏要點：

　　(1)通讀提示要求，明確體裁、人稱和時態三大要素。

　　(2)圈劃出內容要點，按一定順序用數字編好號。同時，要注意內容要點不一定全在內容提示中，可能會散布在書面表達要求及注意事項中。

　　(3)完成草稿后，再次核對所有內容要點，查漏補缺。

　　2. 單詞書寫要正確，避免犯低級錯誤

　　首先考生在平時學習中要重視詞的拼寫，要養成邊讀、邊記憶、邊寫的“手、腦、眼”并用的好習慣。

　　其次學會歸納整理單詞，通過比較，強化記憶。最后務必把《考試說明》中的重要單詞背誦出和默寫出，并做到靈活運用。

　　3. 注重句型積累，打好語法基礎

　　考生應該把簡單句的五種句型結構熟記，另外，根據書面表達評分標準，語法結構的豐富性是決定一篇優秀文章的關鍵。感嘆句、倒裝句、復合結構、強調句型、定語從句、名詞性從句、非謂語動詞、虛擬語氣等交替使用，可使文章的語言充滿層次感，從而較好地體現出考生語言運用能力。

　　4. 注意銜接緊湊，加強文章連貫性

　　要想寫出一篇好文章，提高文章檔次，應增強文章邏輯性、可讀性。考生在平時要注意連接詞的積累，并盡量多地訓練把簡單句連成復雜句，把不相關的幾個句子用連詞連接;在平時的寫作中，要隨時提醒自己用連接詞連接句子與句子、段落與段落;多閱讀一些范文，看文中如何把連接詞用得恰到好處。

　　5. 盡量使用高級詞匯

　　高級詞匯的使用是得高分必備條件之一，能顯示出考生深厚的語言功底。何為高級詞匯呢?就是多使用一些生動、具體、形象的詞語，具體原則如下：

　　(1)盡量用短語代替單詞。這可反映出考生有較強的語言運用能力，避免詞語單調乏味。如：Can you bear his rudeness?可改為：Can you put up with/ live with his rudeness?

　　(2)用新學的詞匯代替以前學的詞匯，換句話說，盡量用別人少用的詞匯。這樣可做到張揚個性，標新立異。如：There is a mistake in your homework.可改為：There exists a mistake in your homework.

　　(3)多用情感方面的詞語。如：luckily，fortunately， really， obviously， to be honest， wholeheartedly等。這類詞語的使用可增強文章的醒目性和感染力，易引起閱卷老師的共鳴。

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