2012年MBA聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)作文寫作演練

    2012年MBA全國(guó)聯(lián)考英語(yǔ)作文寫作演練與點(diǎn)評(píng)

    1 Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should：

    1. describe the drawing，

    2. interpret its meaning， and

    3. make your comment.

    You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.

    該文可分三段來(lái)寫。第一段描述圖畫。第二段分析城市化帶來(lái)的嚴(yán)重后果。第三段談解決問(wèn)題的辦法。This picture leaves a deep impression on me： a skyscraper， like a beast with sharp teeth， is pulling a big tree completely out of the earth. Anyone who has seen this picture will realize that urbanization has made a serious impact on the environment.

    Although urbanization has improved our quality of life in many aspects， we must be aware that it has also brought about a series of unfavorable consequences. First， the farmland in the country is shrinking. For one thing， some rural areas become cities during the process of urbanization， chiefly because they are near big cities and thus included in the urban development plan. For another， more and more rural people are now working in the cities. They bring advanced technology back to their homeland and the land may serve diversified purposes nowadays. Second， sometimes， the rural land， rivers and air are polluted. When more and more new factories are set up， the surrounding environment is likely to decay.

    In my mind， it is not necessarily the result. First， if urban planners take the environment into consideration before the actual construction stage， the present situation will be much better. Second， every citizen should be both the advocator and the practitioner of environment protection. Third， laws and regulations should be established to punish those environment violators severely. Only when such measures are implemented will cities take on a better look and bring all of us a better life.第一段首句描述圖畫，并在第二句中點(diǎn)出了圖畫說(shuō)明的社會(huì)問(wèn)題——城市化對(duì)環(huán)境帶來(lái)的負(fù)面影響。

    第二段首句是段落統(tǒng)領(lǐng)句，該句旨在引出下文的嚴(yán)重后果。可是城市化是有利有弊甚至利大于弊的事情，如果不想談?dòng)欣�的方面，就可以使用一個(gè)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，從而不失客觀。這里請(qǐng)大家用心領(lǐng)悟。而后分兩方面來(lái)說(shuō)：一是耕地減少，二是環(huán)境污染。

    第三段首句別具一格，是特殊的段落統(tǒng)領(lǐng)句，與傳統(tǒng)的辦法類統(tǒng)領(lǐng)句根據(jù)不同情況加以使用，可取得良好效果。比如說(shuō)，如果圖畫給人的沖擊很大，就可以使用一些主觀色彩較強(qiáng)的句型來(lái)感染讀者。而后分城市規(guī)劃者、民眾和法律三方面來(lái)說(shuō)，條理非常清晰。最后一句是結(jié)語(yǔ)，包括一個(gè)平行結(jié)構(gòu)和“城市讓生活更美好”的理念，請(qǐng)大家體會(huì)。在準(zhǔn)備大作文的過(guò)程中，大家慢慢可將具體步驟和相應(yīng)的時(shí)間確立下來(lái)。熟悉操作步驟，能極大地提高效率和成功的概率。拿到題目之后，一是看圖讀圖，一是看指令。綜合考慮后將主題確定下來(lái)，就可以構(gòu)造文章的整體結(jié)構(gòu)了。之后考慮每段大致分成幾點(diǎn)來(lái)寫。如果熟悉這個(gè)過(guò)程，速度是非常快的。在這上面節(jié)省下來(lái)的時(shí)間，可以被用在對(duì)詞句的斟酌之上。這樣主動(dòng)權(quán)掌握在自己手里，考試中就會(huì)有穩(wěn)定的發(fā)揮了。

    漫畫的抽象度逐年增加，這是不爭(zhēng)的事實(shí)。之所以不會(huì)增加太快，且中間有所反復(fù)（如08年的比07年的抽象度低），是為了不讓大量學(xué)生跑題。但是如果不訓(xùn)練自己的理解力，就可能在下面的考試中吃大虧。

    我們之所以還不能靈活地駕馭語(yǔ)言，是因?yàn)榻佑|得不夠多，沒(méi)有采用“沉浸式”的方法。深刻的體驗(yàn)才會(huì)讓我們懂得語(yǔ)言之美，大量的“讀、背、仿、寫、改”的體驗(yàn)才能讓我們的語(yǔ)感有大幅提高，這才是真正的寫作之道。